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Prose Challenge Piece for Learn2Crit-LitPlease critique this in the comments section of the deviation.
I (hic) Will Save You!
“Oh man is this punch good, Danny sad out loud. He thougt this was the best ever party, everyone was dressd so good, the woman all had gorgous jewlry, and there’s as much punch as you could drink! Of coarse, Danny didn’t car that the punch was about 80 proof. He wood drink vodca by the bottel, this coudn’t hurt him. It would go all just to his gut like everthing else. Witch he could stand to loose some wieght from, butt that was for a nother time. Now it was time to show of his stuff to the ladies!
Seeeing a fairly goodlooking woman a couple yards away; Danny slickd back his jet black hare before skooting his chairs over and leaving a ugly marc on the floor. “Awe, dang it, Danny thought, this chair needs wheels like the on at the office.” But the lady was lookin write at him now, so he had to make his movie.
“Hay, sweet checks, hows a
Poetry Challenge Piece for Learn2Crit-LitPlease critique this in the comments section of this deviation.
A Knight so brave
There was a night so true and bold
Who’s hart was filled with purest gold.
She rescued damsels in destress
Upon a hoarse wereing a dress.
Won day he saw a maiden fare
With blewest eyes and flowing hare.
His heart jumped out form within his chest
When his eyes beheld her ample breast.
His cheeks blushed deepest crimson red
As naughty thorts run through his head.
But she just laughed and flicked her hair
While he sat and struggled deeply with the thoughts he bore.
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