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Your Current Challenge Pieces:
Prose Challenge Piece 3 for Learn2Crit-LitPlease critique in the comments section of the deviation.
Sigh… I don’t disserve this, Danny mumbled to hisself. He shoud never have took that artic cruse, if he had’nt, he woldn’t be sitting on top a floatingiceburg now. If he was Superman he could of just flew to the Fortress Of Solittude. But that don’t exist, I guess. All that exits up here is ice, ocaen water, and pengwins. And may be a solar bear or too.Hopefuly they wouldn’t mistook him for a walris.
Denny just wonderd if anyone else on the cruse ship new he was there hero. He didn’t no if the ship didn’t have no sonar or what; but it was comeing way too closed to this iceberg here. Every one nose how far ice bergs go underwater? What if the ice was write under the ship? The cap’n didn’t even shout a torpeto at it! Danny didn’t want to yell Abanon Ship or any thing like that, and he didn
Poetry Challenge Piece 2 for Learn2Crit-LitPlease critique in the comments section of this deviation.
It’s time to read, its time to reed,
You’re book is over their.
I’ts time to start the process;
Go on and grab a chair.
Open up thee brand new book,
Smeell the pages oh so knew.
Flip it, flick it, fan it nouw,
Ewe no wat to do.
It’s time to read, iit’s time to look,
So open pages fresh and white.
Get comfy, grab a bag of cips
And prepare to reed all knight.
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